a friend of a friend's love poem...:)
She’s a feast for my eyes,
She’s where all my interest lies;
The expression on my face belies
The feelings I try to hide in a guise;
Her dazzling smile, her impish face,
Almighty Lord, I rest my case:
She awes me, and I’m in a daze,
I feel I’m drawn into a maze!
Till the kitten purrs and till the hound bays,
I’m all hers till the end of days!
Every day I sit and laze,
I’m enveloped in a haze;
As night goes by, at the stars I gaze,
My friends tell me, “It’s just a phase!”
But I know better, and am all praise,
For Cupid’s struck, and given chase!
She’s my goal,
With her, I’m whole,
I don’t mind missing Super Bowl,
While I serenade to her from the depths of my soul!
But, I’ve had an afterthought:
Does she like me or does she like me not?
Life, right now, consists of zeros and ones,
And my poem, right now, is full of puns;
A penny for her thoughts, a nickel, a dime,
I’ll do anything to make my poem rhyme!
Since I’ve paid attention to every little detail,
I feel this poem of mine shan’t fail;
But if it does, I’ll have a ruse,
To pray, worship, to sit and muse!
God’s given me the gift of verse,
To tell her: You’re His Gift to the universe!
The gist of this poem is, my dearest,
I shan’t ask you out until it’s at your behest!
Don’t consider this to be a jest,
‘Coz for me this is an acid test,
So please tell me the answer to my quest,
That’s all is my sincere request,
I hope with your reply, my heart soars,
If my poem flatters you, well, you’re the source!
{If in my poem you find an error,
Well, I’m no English professor!}
Also...a famous quote. flicked frm a frd
I will not play at tug o' war. / I'd rather play at hug o' war, / Where
everyone hugs instead of tugs. -Shel Silverstein, writer (1930-1999)
23 Comments:
well, first lemme dispose off ur reply to my comment in the prev post. hide my glasses all u want. i guess with being 75% blind with glasses, getting to 90-95% without them aint gonna be too much of a problem. em chesukuntavo chesuko...
and this poem, nice. who's the frnd? and who's the frnd's frnd? curious as ever! :P and yeah, senti munda!!!!!!
sai k....u are mah main man...always reading my blog..thanks re :) infact i think i shuld stop writing a blog..and post personal stuff to you.. hahaha.. makes more sense kada...and dude am waiting to get down to NC... fuck dude.. a blast of a weekend... need the break man... :)
Too much poem kada. You got a lot of talent, dude.
P.S. I am indian.
hehe... yeah. i guess u can do that. but then this anon might get dispoointed. must be someone u know very well who's screwing with ya... "Too much poem 'kada'"!!!! and hey, why does anon say YOU are talented when u stated clearly that this aint urs... hmmm, so someone with a reading problem as well... start the process of elimination now...
Wah Sai what analysis....
I guess this anon should be Kee...as all others are bloggers...Anurag...huh again back to form...one post per day...great!..The post on passion...is mast!...i still remem our inter wing soccer....the passion we played...we were not underdogs but the other team had full support from rest of the hostel..
Joe and You...striking...Anil and myself...left and right back...and Megi covering half of our goal...It was worth taking a video...Hmm wonder if we all will play any time in future.....
dude..we will play...and thats a promise.. how good..am not sure.. :)
am playing with all these guys this weekend... will take a video..and morph u and meghamsh into it..and i think we were the underdogs..simply cos they had a much better team..(on paper)... including insti captain :P
but...fuck yeah..we did play with passion mate...
@anon...
u are indian..and u are gult :) i can make out that much..i aint dumb bro/sis :D
but i hate anons on my blog..enugh anons in this world to deal with..and yeah are u retarded or wot?? i didnt write the poem....pretty clear huh mate :)
get ur thinking cap on when u read my posts ..they are pretty cerebral..
Hi there....nice poem whoever wrote it, loved the last line ...interesting blog too...the blog does provide insights into ur mind
yes...someone anonymous..like u... :) man .. i really hate anonymous commentators.
u better write some name..even a nick will do....
and that is the idea aint it... my convoluted mind...ppl need to read this blog to get insights abt it...:)
"they are pretty cerebral.." good joke bey. more like "they are pretty mental.." :D OK, i take it back, considering that i am meeting u tomorrow only... not much time for u to forget this.
yes ra anurag, ur blog is very interesting, i put on my thinking cap, and thinking shirt, and thinking trousers, and thinking undies in preparation to reading ur blog.
and anon, blogs do provide insights into the minds of the bloggers. D'UH!!!!
i tried to make this poetic but its not happening
so let me just say the poem is cool.
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Three comments deleted....:O....
Anons are either lazy or dumb to miss the name part......
Yes... strike three, and I was out :p
some anons are smarter, though, what say, gnu? ;)
i guessed as much abt strrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrike 3 :)
anons and smart??? who are we talking abt?? :D
Unknown!!! said...
Three comments deleted....:O....
Anons are either lazy or dumb to miss the name part......
- That coming from someone with the name 'unknown'!. Is ironic the word im looking for?
Hey Anon...see atleast i have the name "unknown" which is unique and i have one address(i mean a blog of my own)...so i think that's enuf...i dont want to argue much with those who are scared to reveal themselves...what u thgt u proved urself smart with that...grow up machi..:)
wowwwwwwwwwww........peaaaaaaaace out brothers..or err.mebbe a brother and a sister.. :)
come on come on....ease up..this aint a battlefield... :)
unknown has a name...and so does anon. the only catch being..there are infinite anons :D...of course there can be infinite unknowns too...:)
but i know who unknown is...so anon. if u want to maintain a secret identity..please do so...but email me privately..and let me know..who the damn hell u are..if u so wish.. cos i am a paranoid personality..and i suffer from unknown person attack syndrome :)...
if this is ADI.. i swear to god..ill fry ur hair..if its anyone else..keep coming back..and reading more of my crap :D
"paranoid personality..and i suffer from unknown person attack syndrome :)... "
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*and to think you call ME paranoid* ;)
well....let the world know..who u are then... tell them oh mahaan moose...
Me? I'm a Moose. with 'aknowknee' as a prefix. I got antlers. And I got more brains than that dumb character from the Archies series :p
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